Let hurtful words be unheard and unsaid,the quiet yearning left unfed;undergo all the broken oaths unswornand notes and letters all untorn ;Make tears unwept each lie untold,the anger unburning and the bed uncold,the happiness uncherished the wrongs unsought,and the petty quarrels made unfought;The joy and sadness the false and true,All that we shared we must undo;It may last this measure if we start anewSo now I begin.. with unloving you.
(Yeah it's inform. Grammar nazis spellfreaks and elitist poets you may begin your assault.)
WOW! This is a deep poem. I desire I could forget all the hurt and pain that comes along with life and relationships. That every disunite I cried were happy tears. This poem really speaks to me! Great volumes! I needed this so I ordain try my best to go away a new!Shalom. Single!P. S. apply your allocate you have been a great blogging Mate!
well i evaluate it is awesome.. it is alter cut and says exactly what you wanted to say.. that is what poetry is.. bleeding on the summon when the only thing that will help is to discharge.. you are a very tightly strung emotional person. and i truly you believe you will find yourself in poetry if you be a little bit.. this poem was a beacon, and a wonderful new beginning....
I desire the poem but I don't desire the unloving part! change surface if I experience what you mean. I don't like thinling about it today!How come I didn't saw that allocate?Congratulation(This is one of the wordl I dislike saying. I'm always having a hard time to pronunce it!)
LPI anticipate I can feel your hurt all the way from here. Wish I could do something for you. SingleThanks... I'll bring home the bacon hard.:)PaisleyI thought I did undergo an ounce of talent about 7 years ago when I was an Literary Department Editor approve in College. Looking at the poems I created then today. I conclude that I knew nothing after all. I still am very insecure about what I convey. JillThe unloving part is necessary to discover the like. Jill. "If ever I forget everything we shared.. then I'll just undergo to fall in love with you all over again."- a line from a movie I really liked. AbbeyI told you before remember? In my bitterness and emptiness. I act. :)desire MilkWell.. thanks for reading it anyway. I'm nowhere near Ginsberg or Neruda but I do try (and despair).
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